02 December 2010

3 #2: The Poems



3 comments:

oline said...

and i have absolutely no justification for the gratuitous grammatical error in line two. oh, young oline, what the hell?

Linda said...

is it a grammatical error in line four, where you have referred to Steven as God?

oline said...

oh no. that's the beautiful thing about The Poems. he is always You and i am always little me. awkward.